August 26, 2011

So now I'm standing here alone. I'm learning how to live life on my own.

Sweat dripping, I take a deep breath. I look around in amazement. I am wonderfully, blissfully alone. Smile from ear to ear, I finally relax

This post is in response to a prompt at Write on Edge.
"This week’s assignment was simple: write a story of your choice. The catch? Write it as a tweet. Use only 140 characters – including spaces."



(P.S. I typed this into Twitter to make sure I abided by the character limit, and this is 140 on the dot. But can I just say that the last sentence not having a period is killing me!?!?! haha)

4 comments:

Vapid Vixen said...

This makes me wonder what the hell you were doing and where you ended up. And yeah. You need periods. They're like closure. You just need it. :)

Renee said...

Good job with the prompt! I like this, makes me want to know more.

Sophie said...

ahhh yes, the bliss of aloneness!

Karen said...

Nice take on the prompt! I'd have a hard time dropping a period, even harder to loose an exclamation point. I'm a chronic overuser of those fine punctuation gems! :>

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